You recently took up a part-time job for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: explain why you took up the job describe the problems you experienced suggest what could be done about them

Dear Xavier, I have been the admin assistant in your company for the past 6 months. I was happy when I got a job in
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company. I took
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but, the pleasure of working under convenience
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while continuing my studies. Recently, I am facing some issues with the new business development manager, who used to come when I am working On my computer. It is obvious that to have
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workload in an MNC, but the manager is creating issues on the finished task, above the heavy loads of work. I feel so much pressurised and I am sorry to say, I can’t tolerate the mental torturing. If you can, please change the timings of our working and
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we can reduce the time of interactions
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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