Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agrees how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? What do people do to achieve an ideal society
SInce
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Since
the
earlier Correct article usage
apply
time
, humans Fix the agreement mistake
times
expect
to enjoy a good neighbourhood Wrong verb form
have expected
eventhough
, Correct your spelling
even
the
expectations from an intact society Correct word choice
though the
is
still not clear.Change the verb form
are
This
essay discusses love
as an important element to make
a healthy environment and periodic social Change preposition
in making
gathering
as, Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
perfect
way to get Add an article
the perfect
a perfect
people
along.
Just like people
living in a house are a family, similarly
people
living around us should also
be considered as a family. The only bond that holds together as a family is love
, hence
in order to accept neighbours there should be feeling
of Correct article usage
a feeling
love
and compassion amongst each other. For instance
, when I am out of station
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the station
due to
some work , it's the feeling of love
and compassion that neighbour
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my neighbour
take
care of my pet .
Social gathering is an old ritual and a tried and tested approach Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
of
living together. There are always some traditions in each society which everyone should follow like having dinner parties once a month, gatherings Change preposition
to
on
festivals etc. Change preposition
at
This
helps people
interact with each other and hence
, develop a feeling of compassion for each other. A recent study has shown that societies which started having events every few days,
have observed a reduction in complaints Remove the comma
apply
upto
40%.
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up to
To conclude
, everyone wants to live in healthy
and fulfilling environment and Add an article
the healthy
a healthy
people
living around you Correct article usage
the people
plays
an important role in that. Though there is no definition of a perfect society, Correct subject-verb agreement
play
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
people
can try to make it one by respecting and caring for each other and it can be easily achieved by having frequent meetings to mix up with each other.Submitted by dahiyaannu.13 on
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