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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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There are arguments that traditional course books in schools are threatened to be replaced by the
internet
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. While some people predict that
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 will never happen, in
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 essay I will give my reasons for why I completely disagree with
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 prediction.
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, it is evident that course books in schools have been the backbone for didactic learning and structuring the curriculum in school. Students and teachers, both rely heavily on these texts for learning and, to develop formal teaching and assessment content respectively.
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, with the overload of
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 and connectivity provided by the
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, books are becoming redundant. Usually course books focus on one subject while these days most of the jobs require knowledge of multiple disciplines.
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, it is not sufficient for an educator nowadays to be an expert in one field, but they should
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 have other skills
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 technology.
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 multidisciplinary pedagogical approach is enabled by the use of
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the internet
.
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,
internet
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 helps students to learn anytime and anywhere. They can self-learn at their own pace. The learning can be self-directed or guided by the teachers. With the variety of knowledge and
information
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 available online, the education has become more democratic and the power now lies in the hands of the students. They can gather data from various sources, enhance group activities, improve study skills which will benefit not only their present academic achievement but
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 future education. In conclusion, I completely believe that
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an internet
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, with its wide range of applicability and availability of
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 may replace the traditional textbooks.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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