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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is true that many adolescents are becoming lazy because there have been many non-stop
television
 channels since technology has been extremely developed. Sports programmes are one of them and discourage young people to get involved in team games. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement as most of teenagers enjoy taking part of sports activities with their friends. In recent years, there have been many 24-hour sports programmes on
television
 in order to serve a number of sports fans at their places.
As a result
, these shows have influenced
to
Suggestion
by
 young adults in term of encouraging them to sit in front of the
television
in stead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of participating in any form of sports with their buddies. From World Health Organization reported in 2019 whether there have been increasing in the rates of obesity from 7.88% to 11.14% in
the young
Suggestion
the younger
 groups aged between 10 to 16 years old for over the past five years. According to the report, many counties have to campaign for teenagers to participate more outdoor sports
such
 as running, jogging, basketball, soccer and so on.
On the other hand
, many young people are likely getting involved in team games
in stead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of sitting and
resing
advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status
rising
resting
racing
 in front of
television
at
Suggestion
in
 their home. Some have their sports stars and encourage them
want
Suggestion
to want
 to be like that person.
For instance
, the adolescents in Thailand, they admire the most famous English footballer David Beckham and want to be
successful soccer player
Suggestion
a successful soccer player
 like that.
As a result
, football has become
very popular sport
Suggestion
a very popular sport
 in Thailand. In conclusion,
Although
 round-the-clock sports programmes on
television
 have affected on people’s
lifestyles especially
Accept comma addition
lifestyles, especially
 in
young
Suggestion
younger
 age groups as these encourage
them
people in general
they
 prefer staying indoor to outdoor activities, I strongly believe that there are many teenage groups who enjoy getting involved in team games.
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