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The line graph illustrates the turtle
population
in India divided by four different species between 1980 and 2012. Overall
, the amount of Olive Ridley was identical to that of other categories in the first year and increased remarkably in the following decades.
In detail, in 1980, 100 units
are
accounted for each type of Unnecessary verb
apply
turtles
. From 1980 to 1990, Fix the agreement mistake
turtle
Olive
Ridley specie witnessed a gradual rise in Correct article usage
the Olive
population
, while
other sectors fluctuated over the period. After 1980, the amount of Olive Ridley specie surged to 140 units
in 1998 and oscillated for 14 years, accounted
for roughly 130 Wrong verb form
accounting
units
in the final year. Moreover
, the second
most populated was all species. It remained almost unchanged in the unit compared to the initial year. After the fluctuation of green
turtle Correct article usage
the green
population
Add a comma
,population
its
reduced by 10 Correct pronoun usage
it
units
and made up of 90 units
. However
, Leatherback
Correct article usage
the Leatherback
population
dropped remarkably to about 60 units
in 2012.Submitted by fernnizz.r on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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