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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagrams illustrate the changes that have taken place in a bookstore from the year 2000 onwards till to date.
Overall
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, the book sections have essentially stayed the same in number. The
fiction
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section
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 has,
however
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, squeezed considerably and a new reading
corner
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 has come into existence. In
year
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the year
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 2000, the bookstore had an entrance towards the west with a service desk, new
books
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 and a travel
corner
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 in a row starting from south to north. The centre of the
store
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 was again divided into non-
fiction
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, art, hobbies and cookery
section
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 from south-north. The whole of the northern side of the
store
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 including
northeast
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the northeast
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corner
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 contained
fiction
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books
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. At present, the area of the
store
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 has almost stayed the same.
Likewise
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, no change has been observed in the travel, new
books
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 and help desk sections. The non-
fiction
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section
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 has moved to the northeast
corner
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 of the
fiction
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section
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.
Whereas
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, a cafeteria has been added to the bookstore at the place which was previously allocated to non-
fiction
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books
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.
Moreover
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, the central part of the
store
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 has got a new reading zone that contains three tables and chairs. The Arts, hobbies and cookery that used to exist in the centre previously, have been shifted to the
fiction
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 area which is reduced to almost one-fifth of its previous space at present.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction, section, corner, books, store with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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