Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

Nowdays
Suggestion
Nowadays
the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider unfortunately.The rich
is becoming
Suggestion
are becoming
have become
richer, and the poor are getting even poorer.
In addition
, a lot of studies have shown that already.There is no doubt that
this
situation
can
be cause
for the reason that; on account of
because
of serious problems and is affecting our way of life. I am inclined to believe that the most dangerous
problem
that can arise from
this
situation
is
high level
Suggestion
a high level
of a poverty.
Therefore
, the
problem
is
particulary
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
particularly
acute
for
Suggestion
in
countries without strong welfare. People need basic norms for a comfortable life. Whereas, сountry which consists little percent of the rich and
exeedingly
to an extreme degree
exceedingly
huge number of the poor
,
Accept space
,
simply
can not
can not
cannot
give basic norms for a comfortable life to the citizens.
However
,
Accept space
,
there exists another
problem
which can be triggered by the income gap between the rich and poor. As a consequence
,
Accept space
,
poor people can vigorously decide to solve
this
problem
. Riots and rebellions will be the solution.
This
idea can ignites in people’s heads.
Albiet
Suggestion
Albeit
, Riots and rebellions can make
situation
Suggestion
the situation
even worse, the poor people can undertake
this
problem
in
this
way. Previously,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have to concede that
this
particular
problem
is very challenging to solve.
Nevertheless
, there are two important things that could be done to address
this
situation
.
First
of all economically prosperous countries with a strong welfare should help poor countries to solve
this
problem
.
Secondly
, governments should not be dormant to the
problem
.
Moreover
proficient
polliticians
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
politician
and active part of society should take on
this
challenge.
Although
it is significantly difficult, it
shold
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be done. Eventually, a
standart
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
of living can be advanced.
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