Nowadays, the balance between equality and personal achievement remains a crucial question. It is argued that personal accomplishment depends only on individual merits and
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, if people are free to succeed or fail because of their own work. I totally disagree with that statement. I believe that to succeed we need to have enough resources and Linking Words
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if we live in an egalitarian society, individuals could focus more on their goals.
In modern societies, there are many different people. Those can be cultural, religious and political differences. Linking Words
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, in all cases, there are those who spend all their time fighting because of the inequalities. In my opinion, I think that people should centre their attention on their goals and forget their differences. Linking Words
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, my biology teacher once said that humans biologically spend time criticizing and comparing those who are different. Linking Words
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, those who lose their time with those distractions rather than focus on their goals and objectives. So, with an egalitarian society, the nation will forget inequalities and will be more focused.
Another argument is that everyone must have the same means to reach their personal achievement. It is known that in some countries in Africa or Asia, some have very few possibilities to live well. Linking Words
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, it seems very difficult for them to succeed. Linking Words
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, a youngster from Niger that does not go to school and he is always working for his family will have many more difficulties making money and having a stable job in a company compared to a young adolescent from New York with all the resources of his family.
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, I totally disagree with the statement of individuals who believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible because of their merits. I think that humans need to have enough resources to succeed and Linking Words
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if they do not compare themselves they can center their attention more on their work and have more personal success.Linking Words
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