News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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We can get each and every information from digital and print media at any time. In a media sector, news editors have the authority that which news to run and print on TV as well as in newspapers. I believe there are various things influence on these decisions
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as political pressure and fear of losing viewers.
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tends to hear awful news daily. But it can shift if the authority broadcast large number of positive news. In
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essay I will elaborate these viewpoints. Depending on the situation we as a human being changed, our views from positive to negative and vice versa.
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Similarly, it
applies to news editors whether to show good or bad news. The main thing which effect is a ruling party's behaviour. In India,
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, the Central leaders decide what information to show common people along with how it will help them in upcoming elections. The
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factor is, editors are the decision maker of press
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it will help them to increase viewers and readers of channels and papers. It helps to run operations easily of the firm. Nowadays we all see the increasing cases of non ethical things
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as suicides and rapes and we hear
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news everywhere. That's why it is becoming more common to hear
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news on TV, radio as well as digital platforms. Alternately, we become habituated to know the bad news.
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, we as an individual can switch the negative flow of news easily.
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, if all the people start enjoying family program by watching serials on various platforms rather than visiting often news portals to get an update
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it will surely decrease the amount of viewers of that particular thing.
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the news media will
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develop the format of giving information from worst to positive. In conclusion, the media is depending on common people, it shows only things which they prefer to listen or watch. So
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switch our own viewpoint.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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