he charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts given, provide information about both the number of people who attended entertainment venues and the entrance fee of those,
the
year 2009.
From a first look, it seems that the higher the admission ticket was the less audience attended the event. Change preposition
in the
For instance
, less than 200 thousand individuals watched sports live, whereas
more than five times up preferred to go to the cinema. Accordingly
, the tickets from the latter costed
15 dollars per person, Correct your spelling
cost
while
the former’s ones were five times more expensive, counted for
75 dollars excluding the basketball games, where tickets were priced Change preposition
apply
34
dollars.
Theme parks, Change preposition
at 34
although
they did not have much difference in admission’s
Change noun form
admission
fee
, Fix the agreement mistake
fees
comparing
with sports, they had nearly Wrong verb form
compared
the
triple attendance than them. Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheless
, cinemas remained the most preferable entertainment activity.
To sum up
, people opted for going to the cinema the most as they probably could not deny the fact that it was the cheapest venue, they could entertain themselves and their families as it had also
the best discounts.Submitted by mmitrentzou on
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