The growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or countryside?

#population #countries #government #homes #cities #countryside

population explosion

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The population explosion

Population explosion

is one of

most signifacnt problem

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the most significant problem

most significant problem

of those kind of countries who are developing. As an

usaul

occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure

usual

supporter " Government" could provide new house in around the cities. In

this

essay, I intend to investigate some drawbacks of

this

solution that I believe that,

this

is not a

goold

having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

good

gold

food

way for solving

this

issue easily.

first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

of all, one of the common

way

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ways

to solve

this

issue is building

vertical house

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a vertical house

that it could

accomodate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

hundreds poeple

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a hundred people

hundreds people

hundred people

hundred poeple

in a small part of

land

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the land

unfortunatley

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Unfortunately

Unfortunatley

, as it is easy to build them around the cities, it would have many

inconveniece

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inconveniences

inconvenience

for their

inhabitat

a person who inhabits a particular place

inhabitant

For instance

, lack of public transportation in these places would be an important problem to

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

dislike to live in

this

part of town.

Thus

, it is better to

first

think about making

good rout

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a good rout

the good rout

with a perfect

vehicles

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vehicle

as public transportations and

then

decide to build these vertical

skycrapers

a very tall building with many stories

skyscrapers

Secondly

, another major

factors

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factor

which is very important for children is lack of parks or special places as entertainment.

Neverthelesss

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Nevertheless

, living in a cheap

accomidation

making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances

accommodation

would be good, in these new places could not be enough green places as park for children.

surely

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Surely

, good

ergonomy

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ergonomics

ergonomic

for children in their growing up ways should be considered by

government

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the government

in making decision to provide

new home

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a new home

new homes

for civics. To conclude, in the reality, it is an indisputable issue for government in

third

-world nation to solve increasing population with building

new house

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new houses

a new house

countryside

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the countryside

nontheless

Suggestion

Nonetheless

Nontheless

, I restate again that it would have many drawbacks

such

as lack of public transportation and entertainment place for children that should be considered by city experts in the future.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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