The growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or countryside?

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population explosion

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The population explosion

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is one of

most signifacnt problem

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the most significant problem

most significant problem

of those kind of countries who are developing. As an

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occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure

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supporter " Government" could provide new house in around the cities. In

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essay, I intend to investigate some drawbacks of

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solution that I believe that,

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is not a

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having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

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way for solving

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preceding all others in time or space or degree

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of all, one of the common

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ways

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issue is building

vertical house

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a vertical house

that it could

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be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

hundreds poeple

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a hundred people

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hundred people

hundred poeple

in a small part of

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the land

unfortunatley

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Unfortunately

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, as it is easy to build them around the cities, it would have many

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inconveniences

inconvenience

for their

inhabitat

a person who inhabits a particular place

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, lack of public transportation in these places would be an important problem to

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

dislike to live in

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part of town.

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, it is better to

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think about making

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a good rout

the good rout

with a perfect

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vehicle

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decide to build these vertical

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a very tall building with many stories

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, another major

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which is very important for children is lack of parks or special places as entertainment.

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, living in a cheap

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making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances

accommodation

would be good, in these new places could not be enough green places as park for children.

surely

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, good

ergonomy

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ergonomics

ergonomic

for children in their growing up ways should be considered by

government

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the government

in making decision to provide

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a new home

new homes

for civics. To conclude, in the reality, it is an indisputable issue for government in

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-world nation to solve increasing population with building

new house

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new houses

a new house

countryside

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the countryside

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Nonetheless

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, I restate again that it would have many drawbacks

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as lack of public transportation and entertainment place for children that should be considered by city experts in the future.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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276 words

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infrastructure
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employment opportunities
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