Some people belive that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often seen that people choose to present adolescents with cash rather than gifts in kind, for different reasons. While few contend
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is appropriate, others opine that it is harmful for them.
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with, these days teenagers have a different type of choices for gifts,
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as, digital games and electronic gadgets while older people may not have much knowledge about it.
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, the adults may purchase simple traditional gifts, which might not be liked by young ones.
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, hard cash could be the best option for presenting to the young so that they may buy their preferred products.
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, it can be seen that when a person purchases a gift
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he or she may not check all the features as well as material while buying it and it may be useless for the receiver.
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, capital should be given to teenagers, so that they can buy anything after checking all the pros and cons of the product.
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, when I was in high school, my uncle gifted a watch to me which did not have the modern features like stop watch or world clock and I was not happy with it. In conclusion, according to me, though people give money as a gift to teenagers, but purchasing a product
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, will generate more feelings of love and closeness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fostering
  • independence
  • decision-making skills
  • financial management
  • non-monetary gifts
  • lasting impact
  • thoughtfulness
  • strengthen relationships
  • personalized gifts
  • experience-based gifts
  • personal development
  • relationship building
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