The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The table compares the
number
of workers in ten different industries, divided into three groups of age
.
Overall
, the number
of people
joining the manufacturing, agriculture, local government, and education sectors increase
with Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
ages
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age
whereas
the trend of retail and other ones
is reversed, making an exception of
catering, health, law, and accountancy.
Change preposition
for
The manufacturing
is the most popular among Correct article usage
Manufacturing
people
over 40, with 23 people
recruited, which approximately doubles the number
of youngest
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the youngest
ones
. Similarly
, 18 workers of the oldest group of age
work in local government, compared to only 8 ones
under 25. Education and Agriculture follow a similar pattern, but on a lower scale.
By contrast
, retail and other sectors are selected most by the youngest employees. Regarding retails, this
group of age
gains 23 people
, while
13 people
are relatively equally divided between two
remaining categories. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
the two
number
of people
working in other industries decrease by age
, from 21 people
under 25, plunging to 9 ones
over 40.
Two
aforementioned patterns are not reflected in others. A few more people
in
the Change preposition
between
age
between 25 and 40 than the number
in two
other groups of Correct article usage
the two
age
are employed in catering and health. Meanwhile, three age
categories equally contribute 4 people
to Law sectors. Conversely
, each of youngest
and oldest groups has 3 accountants, in comparison with only Correct article usage
the youngest
two
people
in the rest of ages
.Correct article usage
the ages
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