You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Advertisement has become notorious among the people when buying the brand. Some people believe display, promote to buy the things which are not necessary, while others believe it keep us update about the new products which assist to ameliorate the life style of people.
This
essay agrees with the statement and explain how advertising is persuading frivolous shopping and affecting the person's lifestyle. Some people think exhibit aid an individual to know about new brand when it updates on the market. Due to advertisement facility they can choose the things which they needed conveniently without any endeavour.
For instance
, a recent study concluded that 90% people willing to go shopping when they will find a new product launch in market
such
as clothes, electric stuff, shampoo, soap, clothes and so on.
Moreover
, fashionable lifestyles are escalating day by day so the people are becoming impress with
this types
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these types
this type
of products through the publicity that show on media like tv, online app like Facebook, what app, install-gram etc.
Hence
, the advertisement has promoted people for doing shopping online as well as in a shopping centre.
However I
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However, I
believe due to the publicity people are doing frivolous shopping, which they do not need in their life. They just buy to show up or becoming curious about the brand when they see on broadcast in the media. Even though, they do not need they prefer to buy because new stock confer the discount and they think it cheaper so they buy it.
For example
, most of the time online advertising show discount with profit so the people prefer to buy it even though they do not urge. To conclude, with publication human beings do more online shopping with the commodity they do not need because they want to grab that with the discount and quality.
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