The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the proportion of total people who buy music by three difficult methods in a 7 years-period commencing from 2011, reported every 1 year Generally speaking, it can

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seen that the percentage of music sold through downloads and CDs purchased were gradual decline

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by streams was a sharp increase over the given time period

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