Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?
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Likewise
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Moreover
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with them resulting stars to be all alone. They have no sincere shoulder to rest their head on.
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, Kylie Jener and The Beckhams Family are the best examples.
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