In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Advances in science and technology have transformed many aspects of the contemporary world, and there is an opinion that there is,

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, no longer need to consume animal-origin goods. Personally, I do not agree with

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view and will give reasons for my viewpoint in

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essay. On the one hand, it is true that scientists have discovered a variety of alternatives for animal products in the food industry. An example of

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is fake

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derived from fungi, a fauna species with similar texture

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, which can be seasoned to imitate the flavour of

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, it can

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be made into packages and fibre for textile manufacturing. Countless research is

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under implementation to stop the use of animals completely.

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, I believe that humans have,

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, not yet been able to reach the point where we can totally replace animals in our daily life.

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meat replacement

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a meat replacement

is a possibility in manicured countries, its availability and relatively high prices make it a luxury for others, especially

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-world countries

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as Africa, where poverty and starvation are prevalent.

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, in other fields

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as pharmaceutical industry, animal substitutes are still in development, and scientists have not been able to test drugs without resorting to animal testing. In conclusion, I do believe that

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study and investment should be put into finding animal alternatives, but humans have yet to remove animal use without

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developments in scientific research.

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Topic Vocabulary:

plant-based alternatives
nutritional values
greenhouse gas emissions
deforestation
water usage
ethical considerations
exploitation of animals
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chronic diseases
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