In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advances in science and technology have transformed many aspects of the contemporary world, and there is an opinion that there is,
therefore
, no longer need to consume animal-origin goods. Personally, I do not agree with
this
view and will give reasons for my viewpoint in
this
essay. On the one hand, it is true that scientists have discovered a variety of alternatives for animal products in the food industry. An example of
this
is fake
meat
that is
derived from fungi, a fauna species with similar texture
to
Suggestion
of
meat
, which can be seasoned to imitate the flavour of
meat
.
Moreover
, it can
also
be made into packages and fibre for textile manufacturing. Countless research is
also
under implementation to stop the use of animals completely.
On the other hand
, I believe that humans have,
however
, not yet been able to reach the point where we can totally replace animals in our daily life.
This
is because while
meat replacement
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a meat replacement
is a possibility in manicured countries, its availability and relatively high prices make it a luxury for others, especially
third
-world countries
such
as Africa, where poverty and starvation are prevalent.
Moreover
, in other fields
such
as pharmaceutical industry, animal substitutes are still in development, and scientists have not been able to test drugs without resorting to animal testing. In conclusion, I do believe that
further
study and investment should be put into finding animal alternatives, but humans have yet to remove animal use without
further
developments in scientific research.
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