Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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let me introduce myself, I am Ainur, and I am from Kyrgyzstan, which is the smallest country in Central Asia. With

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letter

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I would like to express my interest in studying

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Bachelor’s Degree in

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Engineering

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Hamburg

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University of Applied Science. Until today, I used to think that a current level of

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technological development is able to solve any problem and bring up a decision. But

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year being under quarantine

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COVID-19 most people have realized that there are still a

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of holes and things that we have to do in

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future. Just thinking that the century of

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technologies brought us huge opportunities is not valid, we are still vulnerable. In

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case

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I have a big desire to be part of a progressive generation with ideas and solutions

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making

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world

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better. But we should have a tool. My tool is programming and

software-development

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software development

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. But why did I choose the

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engineering?

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, I should mention that almost 2 years ago I totally changed my career field and

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from state service to the

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of programming. I am very happy to be part of

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world

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because I can see my achievements and mistakes immediately after doing a project, which always

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me. I am happy when the employees feel the ease of automation of work processes that previously took a

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of time and effort.

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,

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I am working on

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in

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stock company in

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company “Kyrgyz Telekom”, where I have a small team of

software-developers

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and spent a

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of time and effort

doing

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automation the main processes of

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company.

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, I am highly interested in continuing my career in

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Engineering,

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, I still need a

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of

skills

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, practice and

international

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approach

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learning programming. For that reason, I found

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bachelor

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in HAW Hamburg as the most suitable

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due to

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the following reasons: 1.Germany's high achievement in technology among other European countries 2.As a NON-EU citizen, I feel

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international

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environment makes the study process more interesting and

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of adaptation easier. 3. The mix of

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technology, electrical engineering and computer science, which are covered in the BSc

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Engineering

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, provides us with a solid basis for working with these modern technologies,

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with future technologies. 4.

This

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program

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covers a number of topics that interest me the most,

such

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as Mathematics, Electrical Engineering, Microcontrollers, etc. As a future

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software-engineer,

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software-engineer

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software engineer

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I must be an expert in these fields. I am certain that the numerous traineeships and workshops I will take part in during my studies will help me to gain

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knowledge and

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.

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, studying at HAW will significantly improve my English

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. As one

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most important languages in the

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, English will help me to form new connections and expand my social network to a global level. In conclusion, with all the

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listed above, I am in search of bringing my career to the next level. The subjects offered in

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program

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are specifically in line with my professional goals.

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, the mandatory study abroad semester provides a great grounding in which to

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experience divergent cultures and exchange knowledge. I am certain that the knowledge and

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learned from my professional experience, university, and extracurricular activities would make me a valuable addition to the BSc

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Engineering

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offered at HAW Hamburg.