Towns and cities are attractive places. Some people suggested that the government should spend money putting in more works of art like painting and statues to make them better to live do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Art
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  is one of the best means of expression and communication. Gone are the days, when painting work done on the walls of houses now, architecture has given more importance. It has been put forward that
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government
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the government
should invest
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putting in more works of
art
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in the citizen. I agree with
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statement. The major reason behind
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phenomenon is aware youth to local historical figure.
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, in present scenario, the youngster has much knowledge about a pop star film star, but they have no information about historical figures. If historical paintings and statues make in town and cities.
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, they can gain more knowledge about historical figures.
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,
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reason is the tourist attraction. A good illustration is that myriad of tourist goes one place to another place to see the
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. When tourist places will establish in towns and cities.It helps to cities will be more the economic development.
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, there are a number of reasons that the
government
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should not invest
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putting in more works of
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in cities.
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, the
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should give attraction to more pressing issues
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of spending
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on arts and statues. Take an example, medical is the basic need of everyone. Now the whole world is suffering from
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-19 so the administration should spend
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to invent new drugs and vaccines to prevent
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kind of diseases.
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, if historical statues make in cities and towns,
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people respect may not be given to statues so
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is working as the irrespective those who are more loved two historical things.
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, in city
government
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should not spend
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on the arts.
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,
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argument can be annulled by the fact that. There is a number of artists have no work,
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in cities will be making paintings,
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artist gives a chance to show their talent to other people. It is
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working as a source of employment of local artists. To sum up, it can be concluded that cannot be separated from our lives and importance should be given to making a place more appealing, by installing works of
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like statues and painting in public places but respect of these should be maintained.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public art
  • Economic boost
  • Cultural landscape
  • Community identity
  • Mental well-being
  • Social interaction
  • Local businesses
  • Tourism attraction
  • Social cohesion
  • Cultural heritage
  • Creative thinking
  • Public spaces
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