Despite the environmental concerns raised by scientists, people are not changing their life style. Why so? What should be done to encourage the people in order to save environment?

The lifestyle of people
are
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is
incorrigble
impervious to correction by punishment
incorrigible
,
inspite
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in spite
of the environmentalist raising concerns. People are busy in their monotonous lifestyle and educating them can be one of the solutions. People are busy in their daily life to earn their basic necessities.
In other words
, the employers and the businessmen
spends
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spend
most of their time working and are less concerned about the negative changes in nature. Another reason is the nature of adaptability in the humans. They have evolved from many decades and
hence
can adapt to extreme conditions. So many people have adjusted with the natural calamities like
Tsunami
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the Tsunami
and Flood, which are results of negative changes in
environment
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the environment
. To illustrate, Mumbai, a city in India had never witnessed the heavy rains in past
decades but
Accept comma addition
decades, but
due to cutting of excess trees, it has been receiving heavy rainfalls from
past several years
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the past several years
causing floods;
however
, residence
have adjusted
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has adjusted
with
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to
it.
On the other hand
, there may be certain steps which can be adapted to save the nature.
First
and foremost is to educate the civilians about the changes in the environment from past decades and its detrimental effects on earth.
This
can be done by an advertisement, by comparing the temperature and past decade.
For instance
, melting of the glaciers in the Himalayas, because of
increase
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an increase
in temperature can be telecast.
Secondly
, global organisations like WHO, whose prime goal is ensuring the human welfare, should address to all the leaders of the respective countries to spread the awareness amongst their citizens.
This
is because prominent leaders have
positive influence
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a positive influence
on their citizens. In conclusion,
although
the people have to earn their livelihood, with the help of advertisement they can be encouraged to save the environment.
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