There is more and more violence in movies and on TV, therefore it is necessary for the government to control the amount of it to decrease the violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?

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Violence is always being one of the most serious problems in school, family and social life. While I accept that brutish films should be prescribed to keep away guilty impact, I believe that those

also

can be considered as a valuable lesson. On the one hand, at the moment, there are numerous films are being published, especially action flickers to satisfy citizens’ tendency.

Firstly

, individuals have innate imitation, as well as children

are

Suggestion

in the habit of aping the grownups,

this

is the reason for the occurrence of dropping the habit of bullying in the education environment.

Secondly

, people witness the actors who are so cool with the flying kick and scissors kick in a blockbuster, what’s more, they gradually become a trend and seem like an example for others. Some inexperienced ones, yet, which do not figure out how to ape these actions rationally, have the behaviours mostly overflowing violent. Especially in the worst case,

this

causes violent crimes in society.

On the other hand

, if published movies are accompanied by the correct teaching,

this

will be a significant tool to sharpen up the soft skill of teenagers. The reason is that extent and situation is a movie seems to be an example form to illustrate circumstance that perhaps occur in daily life.

For instance

, parents can advise their children how to treat strangers while leaving home alone by showing them the worst case of violence without not being careful, which is in a movie that they have watched before.

Furthermore

, the background created in the films helps people to have a better visualization of how the crime comes to and

causes

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cause

pitful

delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration

beautiful

effects to them.

Thus

, to sum up, it is certain that the government should have solutions to control presidents from violent products of films and movies, but

this

has by no means people to completely escape that genre of flickers.

Submitted by bolaive12 on Mon May 18 2020

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