You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to inform you that I will be spending three months at your organisation for work experience.
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, I thank you for your kind consideration for providing me
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golden opportunity to gain valuable work experience at your corporate house. I am really excited to work
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with your account department team . As you communicated, I will be joining on 1st July
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2024. Since your company deals with international clients, I am hoping to learn vital rules and policies for accounting, tax, trading structure and their applications. I am
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eager to know crucial things about the Indian taxation system and how to clear complicated income tax return forms. I have strong feelings that these 3 months of training will be a turning point in my career.
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, I would like to ask you for some information. You may advise me on what should I prepare prior to joining you.
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, will I get a chance to visit clients during field visits as
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will give me practical exposure. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Make sure to mention the name of the manager if you know it, to make the letter more personal and professional.
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Break the letter into paragraphs with a single clear idea in each, ensuring each part of the letter is distinct for easy reading.
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Remove any extra spaces between words or punctuation for a cleaner look.
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You clearly expressed your gratitude for the opportunity, showing good manners and enthusiasm.
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The tone of the letter is very professional and suitable for a formal context.
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The letter has a logical structure and covers all requested points: thanking the manager, explaining what you hope to learn, and asking questions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciative
  • hands-on experience
  • skill enhancement
  • networking opportunities
  • mentorship
  • organisational structure
  • company ethos
  • onboarding process
  • professional development
  • collaborative environment
  • shadowing
  • logistics
  • corporate attire
  • reporting hierarchy
  • team dynamics
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