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The two maps illustrated that the major developments which have been taken place in the
city
 of Castellon during the years of 2000 and today. Overall, Castellon has become much more modern
city
 with far more shopping and transport facilities during the given time frame. One interesting change is that a new tram line has been built to connect the university with
city
Suggestion
the city centre
city centre
center
.In 2000
,
Accept space
,
 there was not any
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
 near the university area
,
Accept space
,
 a hall of residence have been constructed today. Old market has been turned into new shop together with conversion of
train station
Suggestion
the train station
 into police station
at
Suggestion
on
 one side. A new completely covered market has
also
 been built on the other side of the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. Beside it
,
Accept space
,
the construction of new airport can be seen. The place at the upper right
coner
a place off to the side of an area
corner
 which used to be green with many trees has been clear to make way for new shopping
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. Another striking change is that the port area has been pedestrianized and has a range of entertainment
such
 as cinema
,
Accept space
,
 bar and clubs. The final interesting development is that
bike rental scheme
Suggestion
the bike rental scheme
 has been introduced
at
Suggestion
in
 the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
.
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