Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?
Sicknesses are on the rise among the people lately and it has been discovered that the main reason for these illnesses is solely
stress
. But can one
do without stress
? Suggestion
the stress
This
essay will discuss causes of such
stress
related sicknesses, one
of which is a poor transportation system to and from work
. Also
, one
possible solution is, implementing a policy that allows more employees, no matter the industry, to be able to work
from home for a few days in a week.
To start with, the sicknesses which occur, due to stress
could be, constant headache; and that is
as a result
of overworking. One
of the major causes, is stressing to resume at work
in the morning and returning after close of business. The bad state of the roads in the country lengthens one
's driving duration on the roads both to and fro. For instance
, a bank teller who is supposed to sign in at 8am would have to sleep less and wake at 5am, in order to leave his home at 6am for him to beat traffic and also
meet up with the resumption time. This
short night rests lead to stress
related ailment like migraine.
However
, flexibility of any employment type, reduces the level of fatigue an employee will suffer. Most jobs these days are more office based. That is
, a worker must be confined to a certain building to perform his daily tasks. Since most of these jobs require the internet and a computer system, the solution to these increasing health challenges could be, attending to the daily official duties from the comfort of their houses for some days of the week to avoid the troubles of transport. For example
, the organisation, should set aside at least two working days for each member of the staff to work
without coming to the office to ease the stress
. That is
, there should be a roaster among the workers as to who would be coming to the work
site and who would not, and to also
know what days these changes will occur.
In conclusion, work
hours are not only the time the brain and mind works, tension commences on the way to and from the workspaces. This
essay discussed the reason why most sicknesses are stress
related and the probable solutions to curtail it.Submitted by teejayabdul77 on
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