Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

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Sicknesses are on the rise among the people lately and it has been discovered that the main reason for these illnesses is solely
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. But can
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do without
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the stress
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stress
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related sicknesses,
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of which is a poor transportation system to and from
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,
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possible solution is, implementing a policy that allows more employees, no matter the industry, to be able to
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from home for a few days in a week. To start with, the sicknesses which occur, due to
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could be, constant headache; and
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of overworking.
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of the major causes, is stressing to resume at
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in the morning and returning after close of business. The bad state of the roads in the country lengthens
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's driving duration on the roads both to and fro.
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, a bank teller who is supposed to sign in at 8am would have to sleep less and wake at 5am, in order to leave his home at 6am for him to beat traffic and
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meet up with the resumption time.
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short night rests lead to
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related ailment like migraine.
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, flexibility of any employment type, reduces the level of fatigue an employee will suffer. Most jobs these days are more office based.
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, a worker must be confined to a certain building to perform his daily tasks. Since most of these jobs require the internet and a computer system, the solution to these increasing health challenges could be, attending to the daily official duties from the comfort of their houses for some days of the week to avoid the troubles of transport.
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, the organisation, should set aside at least two working days for each member of the staff to
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without coming to the office to ease the
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.
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, there should be a roaster among the workers as to who would be coming to the
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site and who would not, and to
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know what days these changes will occur. In conclusion,
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hours are not only the time the brain and mind works, tension commences on the way to and from the workspaces.
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related and the probable solutions to curtail it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological advancements
  • constant connectivity
  • job demands
  • work-related stress
  • societal pressure
  • achieve success
  • erosion
  • work-life balance
  • exposure
  • negative news
  • social media comparisons
  • chronic stress
  • mental health support
  • stigma
  • flexible work hours
  • stress management techniques
  • mindfulness
  • access to mental health services
  • community support systems
  • emotional support
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