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We can see more disasters and violence show on TV What are its cause and what effects will they exert on the individual and the society

#disasters #violence #show #tv #effects #society
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Nowadays, programmes related to
violence
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 or disasters appear more and more, along with the decrease number of positive counterparts. There are several re
ason w
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reasons
hy they are frequently shown and they do make impacts on individuals and society. The most important reason for
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 is obviously that television channels want to increase their TRP (television rating point). If any channel has high TRP, it gets more adverts and
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 more revenue.
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, they have to
show
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 sensational or even shocking information.
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, the news channels have to
show
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 what is happening around (
such
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 as disasters or
violence
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), which have be
came v
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become
ery common in our surroundings.
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, people demand that they should be well informed about all things which are prevalent in society. As a consequence, media companies ha
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have
o
show
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 all of that to their viewers.
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, that
vi
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olence c
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violent
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ntents i
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content
s shown on TV causes a number of consequences to both individuals and society.
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, teenagers are badly influenced by these shows because they have an imperious temperament and want to
show
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 themselves.
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, they easily actualized some rude be
haviors o
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
n TV and they think
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 a wonderful thing to express their characters, but it is pe
ril a
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perilous
nd makes the behave violently even commit a crime.
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, media
violence
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 can stimulate fear in some children as it frightens them, making the effects long lasting.
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 can become traumatic in our children as they see it
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It's
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ore and more.
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, they can become aggressive or they can lose a sense of reality and fiction of what they are seeing. Briefly, contents that sh
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are shown
n TV should be censored because it is appropriate for everyone.
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