Some parents do not allow their children to watch TV during school days. Others allow their children to watch TV as long as their school work is finished. Discuss both views
Many of tutors do not accept that their children use programme from television only in their free
time
, while others think that it is nothing wrong in this
if they are watching after study hours. From my point of view both sides have advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays, parents are more preoccupied by their children, s performance at school
, and for this
they try to fix a program for learning to their children.Most of the parents think that TV
is not the most recommended way to spend time but
contrary, Accept comma addition
time, but
this
can affect the child s development.After school children
like adults, need Accept comma addition
school, children
time
to rest and recreate.We have to treat children as equal with us and compare school
Suggestion
schools
time
like a job.For example
, a ten years boy can have so many courses at school
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a school
that is
possible to leave from the house early in the morning and come back home very late in the afternoon.This
is one of the reasons why children need to rest and do not watch tv
.Another reason is that Tv
screes can affect the site view of the children.In addition
to this
watching tv
should be only in free time
.
On the other hand
, each child is different from another.There are children who find in tv
a recreation.Most of the parents chose for their children what to watch on tv
and they find this
a way to relax.For example
,
if a child is watching at their preferred cartoon movie after Accept space
,
school
, it is possible to motivate him and relax.Furthermore
, tv
programs can be like an educational purpose.
In conclusion,
both of the view has a positive and a negative part, but I tend to sustain that children should rest after their Accept space
,
school
time
and watching tv
should be a weekend activity.Submitted by mioara81.p on
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