It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

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benefits to the

society

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and the couples themselves, it is believed that encouragement should be provided to them to marry early. In my opinion, I agree that an early marriage is beneficial since it enables the couple to raise their children in the best possible way. Younger couples have a distinct edge as compared to older ones when it comes to having and raising children.

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, younger people in their twenties are generally in the prime of their health and can,

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, take better care of their children.

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, there are known issues with women giving birth later in their lives and the potentially serious complications that can arise for both the mother and the baby.

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, younger males have more energy and

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drive, thus

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, will be much

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engaged and

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in the upbringing of their child and can spend much more time bonding with and taking care of them which, will result in happy future generations and families. Another point to consider is that younger couples are much more likely to be able to effectively plan for the future of their offspring, as they can start early.

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, the child will have greater financial security and stability when it grows up. A majority of families struggle to pay for the education of the children as it can be very expensive and,

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, can become a big financial burden on them and the

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.

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, couples being able to support their children financially, will reduce the burden on the government.

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, funds can be diverted to other critical areas

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as, improving

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health care

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infrastructure, both

of which will be tremendously beneficial for the

society

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. In conclusion, both the individuals and

society

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can benefit from people marrying early since it will help them raise healthy future generations that are not dependant on the government for their educational needs.