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With the increase in use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To do you agree or disagree. How important do think is letter writing.

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Technology
 has brought tremendous changes in the whole world. Gone are the days, when letters written by hands used to convey messages to others. Whereas nowadays, instant text and calling apps have come into existence. It has been put forward that traditional skill of handwriting will disappear completely. I agree with
this
 statement up to some extent. The major reason why handwriting skill will die in the future. The
first
 and foremost reason the
technology
.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
in the 21st century, due to advancing
technology
 is increasing day by day. Owning to
this
, individuals can send message one place to another place through
technology
 in few seconds.
Consequently
, it is very convenient.
Besides
this
,
technology
 provides very interesting features
such
 as image.
Therefore
, folks are interested to use
technology
. Due to
this
, dwellers are not giving preference to writing.
However
, there are several reasons why handwriting never dies in the futures.
Firstly
, in. Some organisations handwriting plays a vital role, especially in legal work
.
Accept space
.
 Take an example, in bank sector handwriting use as a signature and in work for take records.
Secondly
, there are many parts of India where is no access
technology
. In 
such
 remote areas handwritten letters are used mostly
instead
 of computer letters.
Moreover
, handwriting is very essential in the whole world. When a person writes a letter they show respect for others person. It helps to show better expression in front of other eyes.
Secondly
, folks send a message to other than their attached  emotionally with each other which is not a possible through
technology
 because it seems too artificial. To sum up, the above-mentioned argument in a nutshell, it can be concluded that I think the traditional handwriting will never disappear completely as there are still some enterprises where letters are most appropriate.
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