Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teachign sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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The voluntarism is a very debated topic who divides opinions, some of us think that
this
kind of activity should be included in the school schedule. I agree with this
view, but at the same time I think this
should be a personal choice.
Nowadays, people become more altruistic and understand the necessity of poor people to be helped.There are many nonprofit organizations around the world, therefore
always is needed, new people who want to help without to expect some money instead
.Children should be taught sine they are very little, to help and be kind to another and for this
it is necessary that in schools programmes should be included courses with volunteer activities.For example
, helps the elders in shopping in a bad day, help people with disabilities, maintain the park area, doing English classes for those who are from another country.Adolescents who participate in the charity work gain more experience and knowledge and learn about the value of life.
On the other hand
, children should choose if they want to do charity work, not to be forced by anyone.This
is an activity that it has to be done with pleasure and dedication.In a free country we have the right to choose.There are many ways to convince a young to help with some activities, for example
to reward him with something symbolic, more free time to watch tv or play games, so on.
Taking everything into consideration, I think that there are many positive things in doing unpaid work in order to help other and government should encourage this
kind of activities and support this people
.Suggestion
these people
this person
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