Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that most of the celebrities are known for their luxurious lifestyles than for their performance or talents these days and they can have a negative influence on youth. To a certain extent, I would agree that

this

kind of behaviour would be a bad example not only for

young generation

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the young generation

, but

also

it can be

affect

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affected

for the society. As we know, some of famous people can be extremely inspirational for teenagers because of their hard work. On the one hand, it is a fact that plenty of popular people become famous due to their fancy lifestyle,

instead

of their talent. Their acting talent might be

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a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

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on below the

average but

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average, but

they are making sensation to the public by showing

their

objective case of they

them

glamours lifestyles. It is believed that the behaviour would be a negative influence for the youth as it teaches them about hedonistic lifestyle.

Nonetheless

, there are some celebrities who can be a positive model for young adults. These people

have had shown

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have shown

are showing

were showing

are shown

were shown

to the universe that they have reached achievements due to strong determination and hard work. Famous of the examples would be the

legandary

so celebrated as to having taken on the nature of a legend

legendary

footballers Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi. They are the highest paid football players in the world because of their talent, determination and perseverance. In fact, they

constantly training

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are constantly training

constantly train

and working in order to create own careers. When Messi was a child, the was poor. After his attempts, he became world's best footballers.

Therefore

, both of them extremely inspirational for teenagers as they show that it is essential to fight for their dreams by being a persist human. To sum up, young individuals can be negatively influenced by celebrities who only known for their wealth and luxurious style.

However in

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However, in

my point of view, there are

also

some celebrities who can teach us valuable life lessons by accomplishment.