Recent research has shown that internet and TV have a greater influence over people's lives than politicians

In a new media age,
internet
and TV have seen a dramatic increase,
thus
, it has
a
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an
important role to play in people's lifetime. Some people opine that
politicans
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
are less vital for inhabitants.
Hence
, there
is
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are
different widely
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widely different
views on the issue of whether
politicans
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
have
a
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an
effecient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
impact on modern world or not is
contentious one
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a contentious one
.
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research-based information and salient examples, the essay will be fully highlighted.
First
of all, it is important that our planet has been surrounded
internet
and other
technology
- including TV and disparate channels
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
or
our
programs
of
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on
the
internet
- enable to create as many as possible convenience for complicated life. A plethora of people
are currently attaching
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is currently attaching
it - namely more
children mostly
Accept comma addition
children, mostly
watch some forms of movies on television or by using the
internet
- if any actress or actor
perform
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performs
a marvellous trait, children may imitate their behaviour.
Further
, when adolescents watch movies or
realiti
all of your experiences that determine how things appear to you
reality
-show and
then
they can select their career by seeing a role of diverse professions
such
as teacher, doctor, lawyer and so on. One particularly salient example of
this
is free lessons. Adults as well as youth in many countries accustomed to getting quality lessons by utilizing
technology
, whereas the main part of the
parametres
a constant in the equation of a curve that can be varied to yield a family of similar curves
parameters
are as fast as obtained from
social networking system
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social networking systems
.
Further
and even more importantly, even though TV and
internet
tend to
generaye
bring into existence
generate
generally
globalisation so that it can aid to
allaviate
provide physical relief, as from pain
alleviate
elevate
our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
, not all of the
technology
is able to productivity impact on modern life. Yet,
community
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the community
has
noticiable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
noticeably
humankind who politicians. To put in another way, politicians
direcly
without deviation
directly
influence the internal and external life of the individuals rather than the
technology
. It is evident that avoiding of threat
of
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to
national security, embarking on
healthy lifestyle
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a healthy lifestyle
and extricating the population out social and economic
defeciency
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
deficiencies
as well as hardships are fully accomplished by politicians.
Further
instance of
this
practice is Shavkat Mirziyoyev who the president of Uzbekistan has been implemented far much decisions which relieved lucrative laws, it tends to instill in offspring the
sence
a general conscious awareness
sense
of
venerate
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veneration
and helps to the teenagers easily acquisition of any fields. By way of the conclusion, whenever
technology
has a vast amount of helpful effects for different ages humans, we should attempt to deflect our attention to the side of the politicians because of they are reliable in a foreseeable future, despite there are valid arguments to the contrary
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