Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

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Many people have been out of jobs for reasons beyond their control.
As a result
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of
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, it is thought by some that the
government
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ought to provide financial support in the form of weekly allowance for people without any form of employment. In my opinion, I believe that state
government
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should divert its funds to other sectors
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as
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or
education
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as
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will benefit a wider section of the population. A good reason why the
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should not pay the weekly payment
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for
people out of a job is that
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kind act will promote laziness among the country citizens.
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, when people receive free funds, it discourages them from applying themselves whole-heartedly to find a job.
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will
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encourage them to stop living within their means as they are certain that the about the fact that the
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is responsible for their upkeep.
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, paying unemployed people from taxpayers' money on a weekly basis is considered to be unfair as taxpayers worked hard to earn their own living. Another point to consider is that
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spending on the unemployed would affect funding of other sectors
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as
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and
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. The
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sector needs money for medical research, infrastructure development and purchase of medical equipments. Availability of the right medical facilities would lower mortality rate and a lot of families would benefit from
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.
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, the building of new schools and renovation of older schools will give opportunities to more children to have good
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which
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subsequently make
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subsequently makes
them better leaders of tomorrow. In conclusion,
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should look into making the
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and
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system better rather as
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will improve citizens' quality of life rather than a diversion of funds for the employed.
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