Even though developing countries receive financial help, poverty is still an issue. Some say they should be receiving other kind of help, to eliminate poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give examples and suggest what other form of help can be offered.

Poverty
is one of the major
concern
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concerns
of the developing countries. Even though, these nations receive abundance of financial help
,
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,
however
,
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,
this
issue is not resolved till now. To fill up
this
huge gulf of
poverty
, something extra has to be done. I personally feel that to overcome
this
problem, financial as well as another sort of help is required. In
this
essay we are going to discuss how the
poverty
can be eradicated
with
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by
the different means.
This
is unavoidable factor that alone
fainancial
involving financial matters
financial
support will turn the curve of the
poverty
line in itself. Every year
,
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,
huge financial aids have been provided by the developed nations, but at the end,
result
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the result
remains the same because something is still missing there which is the ideas to generate the wealth. In India,
for instance
,
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,
every year special allowances have been declared for the farmers
,
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,
despite,
sucide
the act of killing yourself
suicide
rates
has been incresed
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have been increased
has been increased
due to debts. .
Only thinng
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The only thing
Only thing
that could be helped to surpass the
poverty
is not only to provide financial supports but the formulas through which the expenses should be eliminated and the revenue is to be generated.
Goverment
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Government
and social organisations must have
create
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created
those
uflifting
the rise of something
uplifting
ideas by which people can set up their small scale industries, local businesses.
This
is a sort of help which can feed a man not for a day but for the life. In conclusion, to emit the
poverty
, every country must take serious steps. Financial help as well as positive attitude toward the growth of the nation
wise
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wisely
is important.
the
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The
proposal of wealth generation
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
the developing countries must be incorporated positively.
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