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Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#universities #members #students
Nowadays, stu
dents co
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students'
student's
ncern about getting pla
ce in
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a place
 university and, in fact, there is real reason for wondering. In majority faculties, the biggest number of students are men. I believe that the
first
 figure of modern
society
 is equal rights for male and female respectively. In
this
 essay I will try to expand and show my own opinion.
Firstly
 lets look at his
tory of
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the history
 science and university. Who was in charge during generations? The answer is not hidden. Men have written books, translated letters, taught students, participated in a debate. Boys from small age were encouraged to go to school and obtain knowledge, whereas girls were invited to work at home, grow children up and cook. Social rules and established norms required wom
an to
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a woman
women
 be at home. They said that brain of woman is small and not able to learn physics, math, chemistry and biology. It was changed in 20t
h century. W
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the 20th century
omen got a right to vote, study and choice hoe to conduct her own life. As we can see, opportunities of women were limited. The
next
 step in
society
 was giving places in universities that women could study and work. But the idea, that woman is so emotional and does not have special cells in bra
in,
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the brain
was strongly living in min
ds of
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the minds
society
. Some professors preferred to teach and work with males than with fem
ale.
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females
a female
That is
 why the solution was to give equal numbers of places to men and women. I think that it was the best way to encourage women to study and decide a problem with sexism on official departments. On the other hand, people think, that the most important is rung of knowledge to apply university that your gender. Honestly, it is a part of true and good view. It just shows that we are equal, and we have to conduct competitions between our brains. Just one point is that
this
 story will have a sense when rights male and female will be equal. In conclusion, I think that soon we will have tol
erant an
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a tolerant
d harmony
society
, when everybody will put efforts to create it. These times, the most important is to listen to each other, be friendly and eradicate sexism in our beh
avior pa
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behavioural
tterns, words and business.
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