some people think that young people should follow older people s examples while others think it is good for young people to challenge older people s opinions and thoughts.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is thought by some individuals that adolescents must obey elder
people s pat
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people s pat, however
peoples pat however
people spat however
however
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,
it is believed by others that
critizising
find fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticizing
criticising
elders viewpoints and concepts should be done
.
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.
This
essay will discuss both statements and in my
opinion i
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opinion, I
opinion I
definitely side with the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
view. On one hand
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,
older
people s
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people's
peoples
life
experiences seem to be almost similar as the age of an adolescent
as a
result they
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result, they
might acquire better management skill and problem solving strategies
.
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To illustrate
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if there is a feud between siblings in a family their parents and grandparents advise them about the importance of humility and endurance in a relationship by setting an example
from
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for
their own
life
.
Moreover decision
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Moreover, decision
making capacity of youngsters is considered as immature as they made conclusions in
a
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an
emotionaly
in an emotional manner
emotionally
emotional
based and
egocenteric
limited to or caring only about yourself and your own needs
egocentric
thoughts. According to a recent survey
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,
divorce rate
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the divorce rate
in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
is
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was
far higher now than a 50 years ago statistics as many marriages
are happen
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are happening
with social media friends and eloped marriages
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Hence
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if we follow the examples of our
ancestors arranged
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ancestors, arranged
marriage that would live long.
on
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On
the
otherhand
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other hand
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,
the open
mindness
that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
minds
and higher educational
standardes
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
of youths urge
themto
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them to
challenge the obsolete thoughts of elderly.
For example
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,
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people still believe in male
domine so
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does mine, so
does mine so
do mine so
has done mine so
is doing mine so
they might force for female foeticide and want dowry system
marriages but
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marriages, but
as we can see that youngsters realized the
importence
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
of gender equality and a majority of them oppose these ideas.
In addition
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,
the superstitious
believes
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believe
of older people might discourage youngsters to reach in more
heigts
a high place
heights
in their lives.The best example is the
life
story of famous
mathamatition
a person skilled in mathematics
mathematicians
mathematician
MS Ramanugen
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,
whose talents never come to light if he had
obey
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obeyed
his
mothers
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mother's
suggesion
an idea that is suggested
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that
Brahmins
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the Brahmins
(upper caste people) are forbidden to fly overseas. To conclude
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despite the fact of mature thinking
abilityand
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ability and
life
experience of elderly.I believe that questioning their thoughts and opinions by youths can clearly be helpful to achieve more development and
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
in individual level and social level.
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