some people think that young people should follow older people s examples while others think it is good for young people to challenge older people s opinions and thoughts.Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is thought by some individuals that adolescents must obey elder
people s pat
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people s pat, however
peoples pat however
people spat however
however
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,
it is believed by others that Accept space
,
critizising
elders viewpoints and concepts should be donefind fault with; express criticism of; point out real or perceived flaws
criticizing
criticising
.
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.
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essay will discuss both statements and in my Linking Words
opinion i
definitely side with the Accept comma addition
opinion, I
opinion I
later
view.
On one handreferring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
,
older Accept space
,
people s
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people's
peoples
life
experiences seem to be almost similar as the age of an adolescent Use synonyms
as a
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result they
might acquire better management skill and problem solving strategiesAccept comma addition
result, they
.
To illustrateAccept space
.
,
if there is a feud between siblings in a family their parents and grandparents advise them about the importance of humility and endurance in a relationship by setting an example Accept space
,
from
their own Suggestion
for
life
.Use synonyms
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Moreover decision
making capacity of youngsters is considered as immature as they made conclusions in Accept comma addition
Moreover, decision
a
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an
emotionaly
based and in an emotional manner
emotionally
emotional
egocenteric
thoughts. According to a recent surveylimited to or caring only about yourself and your own needs
egocentric
,
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,
divorce rate
in Suggestion
the divorce rate
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
is
far higher now than a 50 years ago statistics as many marriages Suggestion
was
are happen
with social media friends and eloped marriagesSuggestion
are happening
.
Accept space
.
Hence
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,
if we follow the examples of our Accept space
,
ancestors arranged
marriage that would live long.
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ancestors, arranged
on
the Suggestion
On
otherhand
Suggestion
other hand
,
the open Accept space
,
mindness
and higher educational that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
minds
standardes
of youths urge a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
themto
challenge the obsolete thoughts of elderly.Suggestion
them to
For example
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,
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,
elder
people still believe in male advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
domine so
they might force for female foeticide and want dowry system Suggestion
does mine, so
does mine so
do mine so
has done mine so
is doing mine so
marriages but
as we can see that youngsters realized the Accept comma addition
marriages, but
importence
of gender equality and a majority of them oppose these ideas.the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
In addition
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,
the superstitious Accept space
,
believes
of older people might discourage youngsters to reach in more Suggestion
believe
heigts
in their lives.The best example is the a high place
heights
life
story of famous Use synonyms
mathamatition
MS Ramanugena person skilled in mathematics
mathematicians
mathematician
,
whose talents never come to light if he had Accept space
,
obey
his Suggestion
obeyed
mothers
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mother's
suggesion
that an idea that is suggested
suggestion
Brahmins
(upper caste people) are forbidden to fly overseas.
To concludeSuggestion
the Brahmins
,
despite the fact of mature thinking Accept space
,
abilityand
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ability and
life
experience of elderly.I believe that questioning their thoughts and opinions by youths can clearly be helpful to achieve more development and Use synonyms
sucess
in individual level and social level.an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
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