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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #alternatives
Libraries are the main places, where all useful and informative books are kept, everybody can borrow them for a short period to read, even it is a novel or a textbook. Libraries have their strong position in the public and it would not be affected by any other alternatives. It is disagreed, that libraries should be closed, as society has other sources. The libraries are the superb
cheapie
relatively low in price or charging low prices
cheaper
cheap
cheep
 places to borrow a
book
 as well as by discussing the other benefits of libraries that will prove
this
.
To begin
 with, Libraries are very affordable places for everyone, who wants to read any
book
. A person can get all desirable material from the library even it is a CD player or a
book
 by paying them a very small fee.
For example
, in Australia all libraries have a few cents joining fee, they charge at very
first but
Accept comma addition
first, but
 after that, a member can borrow any
book
 by showing their membership card. So there are no places that provide very cheap service in society. These places must be promoted by the government so more people can know about the library's benefits.
Furthermore
, there are a plethora of advantages that libraries have, one of them is a quiet, clean, and smoke-free place to read or write something. As an example, in Australia libraries have a noise restriction placed on each section's wall, even operators are stopping people from making noises.
However
, there are
also
, no smoking signs, on the walls to warn people from smoking in the library. There are not many other places in the community, which provide
individuals
Suggestion
individuals with this type of
this
 type of facility. In conclusion, libraries are
also
 a part of our society and responsible to provide all useful and
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
stuff
personnel who assist their superior in carrying out an assigned task
staff
 at less cost and in a perfect place for every individual.
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