A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Tourism is one of

most important sources

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the most important sources

in economy for several

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country

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countries

around the world.Unfortunately,

their

in or at that place

there

are some disadvantages

for

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of

expanding the tourism industry.

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as, influences the

loucal

relating to or applicable to or concerned with the administration of a city or town or district rather than a larger area

local

culture and the crime rate. I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

, increasing in the

number

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of

traveler

a person who changes location

travellers

will

benifet

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

the

country

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if they manage the

prosses

a particular course of action intended to achieve a result

process

processes

well and take safety. Due to

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

,

their

in or at that place

there

are different

countries

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country's

size down the

number

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of

visiters

someone who visits

visitors

visits

owing to the safety and the crime management.

Firts

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

of all, tourists could

influnce

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

influenced

the local culture

becuase

for the reason that; on account of

because

they have the economic power.

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instance locals

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instance, locals

start learning

thier

of them or themselves

their

languages for

attract

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attracting

them to buy

form

a giver or sender

from

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

tire

shops.

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, the crime

number

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and

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

travelling

travels

number

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have a Positive

relatioship

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

relationship

.

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why, some countries are very strict by

give

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giving

the

permition

approval to do something

permission

permissions

for some

devoloping

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

developing

countries.

On the other hand

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, there are many advantages for the tourism that help in developing the

country

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.

First

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thing

first

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, some countries' economy

relay

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relays

on

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in

the tourism industry by 20% of their GDP as France.

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, it makes the

ecomomic

of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth

economic

economics

cycle move faster by

supourt

give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to

support

sport

supports

different

felds

a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed

fields

feeds

folds

.

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, hospitality rely mostly on the power of

tourists

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tourists'

number

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.

Secound

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Second

of all, high

standerds

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standard

standards

faselity

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facility

facilities

and the safety may

attracte

direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes

attract

some

investers

someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns

investors

to the

country

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.

Lastly

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, the

unemployee

not engaged in a gainful occupation

unemployed

rate will

decerase

decrease in size, extent, or range

decrease

dramatically by increasing in the

vesiters

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amount. To sum up, the advantages are more than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

. In my point of view, countries must

aperint

clearly revealed to the mind or the senses or judgment

apparent

standards for entering the

country

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to achieve the benefits that we mentioned.