The two maps illustrates the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012

The two maps illustrates the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012
The two maps compare the scale of
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
campus as it was in the years 1985 and 2012.
It is clear that
the main change for 2012 included the addition of
new
Correct article usage
a new
show examples
site.
Furthermore
, the school became able to accommodate more students. Compared to the map in 1985, in 2012, there was an increase in the number of pupils attending the school, at 2300. A notable change was the reform of the shape of
big
Add an article
the big
a big
show examples
car park
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
the top of the map, from
rectangle
Correct article usage
a rectangle
show examples
to be semicircle. In the classroom block was placed in the east,there was
also
one more storey so there are total
3
Change preposition
of 3
show examples
storeys. Between 1985 and 2012, a small car park was demolished and
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
trees were planted on
this
site,
while
the library was replaced by the resource
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
computer
Add an article
the computer
a computer
show examples
room.
Moreover
, in the south of the map, there was a striking change
that
Change preposition
in that
show examples
the playing field was contracted in order to construct two classrooms buildings and the building involving
swimming
Correct article usage
a swimming
show examples
pool and fitness club.
Submitted by ngtthao13 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: