The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The given line graph illustrates the amount of four kinds of meat (
chicken
, beef
, lamb, fish
) which were consumed over a period
of 25 years from 1974 to 2004 in Europe. Units are measured in grams
per person per week.
Overall
, the consumption of beef
and lamb decreased over the given period
, while
for chicken
, it rose. At the start of the period
, beef
was the most popular meet
, which was replaced by Correct your spelling
meat
chicken
from 1989 to 2004. As the graph shows, it is highlighted that the trend of the fish
a slight
changed all over the Change the word
slightly
period
.
With regards to the amount of beef
used, it began at around 220 grams
and then
dropped slightly to nearly 180 grams
in 1981 before growing sharply to approximately 215 grams
per person per week. After that, however
, the figure a
Correct article usage
apply
gradual
decreased to just above 100 Change the word
gradually
grams
in final
year. A similar pattern can be seen from the graph for the intakes Add an article
the final
lamb
and Change preposition
of lamb
fish
, which showed an overall
decreasing trend with some fluctuations in
between the years.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the consumption of chicken
stood at less than 150 grams
in 1979, where the figure rose steadily till 1999, after which it increased significantly and reached a peak of 250 grams
by 2004. The
Correct article usage
Fish
fish
consumption remained unpopular throughout the period
with a little decline of 10 grams
from just over 60 grams
per person intake.Submitted by mahanbet0527 on
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