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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
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The given line graph illustrates the amount of four kinds of meat (
chicken
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,
beef
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, lamb,
fish
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) which were consumed over a
period
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 of 25 years from 1974 to 2004 in Europe. Units are measured in
grams
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 per person per week.
Overall
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, the consumption of
beef
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 and lamb decreased over the given
period
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,
while
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 for
chicken
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, it rose. At the start of the
period
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,
beef
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 was the most popular
meet
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meat
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, which was replaced by
chicken
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 from 1989 to 2004. As the graph shows, it is highlighted that the trend of the
fish
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 a
slight
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slightly
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 changed all over the
period
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. With regards to the amount of
beef
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 used, it began at around 220
grams
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 and
then
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 dropped slightly to nearly 180
grams
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 in 1981 before growing sharply to approximately 215
grams
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 per person per week. After that,
however
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, the figure
a
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apply
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gradual
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gradually
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 decreased to just above 100
grams
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 in
final
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the final
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 year. A similar pattern can be seen from the graph for the intakes
lamb
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of lamb
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 and
fish
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, which showed an
overall
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 decreasing trend with some fluctuations
in
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apply
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between the years.
On the other hand
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, the consumption of
chicken
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 stood at less than 150
grams
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 in 1979, where the figure rose steadily till 1999, after which it increased significantly and reached a peak of 250
grams
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 by 2004.
The
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Fish
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fish
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 consumption remained unpopular throughout the
period
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 with a little decline of 10
grams
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 from just over 60
grams
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 per person intake.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, beef, fish, period, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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