You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter ●describe the problem with the equipment - speaker ●explain how this problem is affecting your work - communication problem ●say what you want the shop or company to do - replace the laptop
#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company #●describe #speaker #●explain #communication #●say #laptop
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
to inform you that I am facing a problem with laptop
speakers, so it making hard
for me to talk to the Correct pronoun usage
it hard
clients
.
My name is Rhea, and I am a customer service representative in your company, and I am doing work from home . When I applied for this
position, you send
me the Wrong verb form
sent
laptop
in order to communicate with clients
. However
, after a few days, I have
noticed that my voice Unnecessary verb
apply
is
not clear to Wrong verb form
was
clients
even I
reset my computer many times .
Correct word choice
though I
Due to
speaker
issue , I can not do meetings with my current Correct article usage
a speaker
clients
, I postpone
half of my meetings to next week ,which Wrong verb form
have postponed
effects
the sales of our company Wrong verb form
will affect
as well as
my performance.
Therefore
, I would like to request for shipping me a new laptop
because I can not use my personal laptop
for work purposes .If I receive replacement
on time ,Fix the agreement mistake
replacements
then
I could handle customer complaints as well as
meetings on time.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Rhea.Submitted by kmlchahal97 on
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task achievement
Include more details about the steps you have already taken to troubleshoot the problem.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly from one idea to the next for better flow.
greeting and closing
The letter has an appropriate opening and closing, making it polite and professional.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph successfully focuses on a single idea, making it easy to follow the writer's thoughts.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal complaint, demonstrating professionalism and politeness.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite