Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

There are people who think that children are getting free

time

a lot more

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

they need and they think that

instead

that

time

should be spent on education or work given by the school. In

this

essay I would like to express my point of view and talk about how they should use their free

time

with relevant examples.

Firstly

, children should have free

time

, because it helps them to grow. I agree education is important, but if the child is all ways learning and stuck with books they don'

t

go into other fields.

For instance

, they young ones who are all ways study and ignore other

activity even

Accept comma addition

activity, even

in their free

time

, they do become smarter

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

other but they will be in loss of what is the quality of

life

and other entertainment in their

life

. So with education, having free

time

to do other

activity

such

as sport, painting, etc. Helps them to make them grow more mature.

Secondly

, I think children should have a balance between study and their free

time

. If they have proper balance

then

they won'

t

miss out on both things. If they spend too much

time

on free

time

and don'

t

do their study,

that is

also

a loss and they want to achieve success in their

life

.

For example

, in reviewing USA children, mainly boys spend lots of

time

playing video games, due to which it is hard for them to sit in class or do their school work which will affect their

later

Suggestion

later life

life

later when they grow as they won'

t

have a proper job and lack of confidence. So playing video game and spending free

time

by doing other activities like playing football, cricket or painting, dancing is different. Doing an outdoor

activity

is the best way to spend their

time

, as it make their mind, refresh and stress free due to which they will be able to consecrate on their course and

also

keep them healthy. To summarize, as there is saying " Education is the key to success", it does, but it doesn'

t

mean that whole day we should spend in front of books. We should involve use in other

activity

so we learn new things and educate our self with a variety of

life

experiences.

Such

as one can learn swimming, or playing sport so later they can be good at.