In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
In recent decades, in many countries, some adolescents choose to leave their parents' home immediately after finishing school curriculum and like to stay alone on their own or share with some peers. Some people believe that
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, I think it is beneficial for the teenagers who decide to live outside of their home
On the one hand, those who believe that it, living away from family will cause problems for the young people who choose Linking Words
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. They have to manage with many facilities which they used to have in their parents’ accommodation. Linking Words
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, those students who live on their own cannot afford to buy all the appliances like TV, sound system and much more which they used in the house. In case of sharing a room or apartment with friends may cause some behaviour and attitude issues. To illustrate, some students who stay with a friend who usually smoke cigarettes can create conflict between them. Linking Words
As a result
, they may have to compromise with habitual issues from the partners.
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On the other hand
, I support the view of living away from the family due their advantage. Living outside of the family house can bring maturity in the teenagers who choose Linking Words
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, those students who live on their own can learn house chores like cooking, washing and managing personal’s requirements on their own ability. Linking Words
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, those students staying with friends may bring with them a sharing attitude. Linking Words
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Also they
may interchange their knowledge with the room partners.
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, there are some negative effects of staying away from the family for a student regarding finance and disturbance from peers, it is my belief that it can be proved a positive change with aspects of developing maturity, managing with personal chores, and sharing attitude with friends and family.Linking Words
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