Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

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Growing globalization has a great impact on daily

life including

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life, including

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aspect as ubiquitous availability of imported products in supermarkets. Some experts claim that only local products should be sold in supermarkets. There are certain positive and negative sides of

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however I

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however, I

am as a buyer

prefer

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prefers

to have the access to a large range of products including imported since it is convenient and pleasant.

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, certain countries of regions sometimes are unable to produce enough food, or it is impossible to make

certain type

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a certain type

of product,

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it is a necessity for them to purchase products from other countries.

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, there is a trend of cooking international dishes,

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Italian or Asian cuisine is highly popular currently, which often require original ingredients for preparation. Due to these reasons imported products are needed and highly appreciated by

majority

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the majority

a majority

of the public.

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, the preference to sell only local products has its benefits. For countries’ company producing certain type food it is indeed profitable if there is no competition with others similar international companies.

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, it is perhaps beneficial for the countries’ economy

since

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for

local

businesses producing

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businesses, producing

food have greater chances to be in the market and as a consequence to prosper.

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, at the same time it might create a monopoly and uncontrolled rise of prices in supermarkets. To sum up, having examined some of the main arguments for and against imported products, I am of the opinion that preventing imported goods being at supermarkets’

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shelves

is unwanted and would have some negative implications

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as probable scarcity and

customers

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customer

dissatisfaction.

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, it might have unforeseen

ramifications

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ramifications, such

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as prices

increase which

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increase, which

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disadvantageous for an average buyer.

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