the most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. agree or disagree?
Some people believe having a high income in a
job
is more important than other items. It is clear, high wage is significant, but other items are important too. Salary and other items need to be considered, however
, the salary isn’t more important than other items.
To begin
with, when people want to choose any career or job
, considering other items like job
security is more important than high cash. For example
, when people spend a lot of years working for a company, they can fire them. As a result
, people lost their job
and their time. Another main element is secure. To illustrate this
, people must have worked in a safe condition without any danger. For example
, working with a dangerous device without any costume or other protect things like gloves. However
, if people working in a good place, but they don’t earn enough money, they have a lot of troubles.
In addition
, friendly condition is important. When people work
hard, they need a relaxed condition in an office. To illustrate this
, when people work
in a relaxed atmosphere without any destructive things, they can better task or thing. The last
item is a distance from the office to the house and how people can go to work
? With a bus or subway? If their office is far from home, people always are tired. On the other hand
, people need enough money to get a bus or rent house and it is undeniable item.
In summary, considering the whole information when people want to choose a career is important. If people just mention the high wage, maybe they have some other problem at work
. However
, money is a significant thing in life and people should attention to that.Submitted by marziiye.ramezanii on
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