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Living in a
country
where everybody has to speak another
language
expect her
/
his self mother tongue, certainly,
this
can create serious social problems and
also
practical problems.
This
essay strongly agrees that living in a
country
that you cannot speak the local
language
language
there, of course,
this
can cause several problems to you,
for instance
, you expose social problems,
such
Suggestion
Such
as, you will not able to communicate with other people
to
Suggestion
with
working or become Friend with another of
this
problem
can make practical problems,
for example
, You cannot make a successful working on the relationship.
First
of all,
this
can make deep social problems,
for example
, he
/
she will not able to find an excellent friend or a person who can help her
/
him. So
this
can make more and more problems.
Besides
,
this
can cause
problem
Suggestion
a problem
problems
with a job or every working that it calls Practical
problem
,
such
as, buying and more and more work,
however
,
this
also is
Suggestion
has also been
a serious
problem
. In conclusion, immigration to graduate or every working to a
country
where main
language
that
country
is different with
language
that person
this
can make
problem
to everybody whom he
/
she does not know or less find out main
language
that
country
,
for example
, it can cause main social issues,
furthermore
, practical problems.
Finally
, In my attitude, everybody who decides to go to a foreign
country
, he
/
she can learn about that
language
and after that he
/
she go that
country
.
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