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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Language barrier
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The language barrier
 has become the main challenge for people living abroad. Some people believe that non-native speakers who live in a foreign
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 may be confronted with both serious social and practical problems. I entirely agree with
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 statement, and
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 essay will discuss what kind of social and practical problems may result from lack of proficiency in the native
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 by giving examples.
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Language barrier
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Language barriers
The language barrier
 may lead to social isolation, which can be regarded as a social problem.
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 is to say, a lot of immigrants are facing trouble with integrating into local communities due to a lack of
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 competence. To be specific, some people who have been living overseas for decades are still struggling to socialise with natives.
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, according to a study, in Australia, 80% of
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immigrants, mainly
 have connections only with people of the same ethnic group.
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,
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 ability is crucial in the social sphere for non-native speakers who live in a foreign
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.
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, individuals who have difficulties in using the local
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 may experience some practical problems in their overseas lives. It is difficult for foreign people to find a job in a local company because
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 is fundamental for a job interview. Meanwhile, it is inconvenient for people to access public services if they have obstacles when speaking the local
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.
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, many overseas students are not confident
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about
 calling medical services because of
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 barrier;
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, they usually decide not to use the service.
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, I agree with the argument that living in a foreign
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 may cause some practical
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problems, especially
 when you need to speak
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the local language
local languages
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. In conclusion, it is true that when people live in a foreign
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 and cannot speak the local
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 they will face a variety of social and practical issues. The only way to get around
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 problem is to gain proficiency in the native
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 of the
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 they live in.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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