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it is impossible to help all people in the world so governments should focus on people in their own countries. to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many people claim that the governments should look after their own citizens
instead
 of people from other parts of the world which is agreed by many people all over the world by that way, safety can be achieved.
To begin
 with, taking care of people in a specific country is the duty of every government to prevent many disasters like an increasing number of homeless people in local communities that leads to living under bridges or in metro stations. In
this
 case, the government should assist the citizens by providing shelter and free food.
In addition
, the number of unemployed people is increasing with high rate
Therefore
, authorities should take care of unemployment seriously to reduce the number of jobless people.
This
 reduces effectively crime rates resulting from lack money, which make their country safer.Another purpose of the governments is to improve the living standard of their own countries. on the opposite han
d
Suggestion
On
, people who migra
te
Accept space
,
 or even visit other countries should be taken into account
this
 is because we are all humans and from humanity, we should help each other in anytime anyone needs help so I think that the government should be responsible for the people who are only in their own boarder only even if that person is of other nationality
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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