You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter explain why you cannot keep the appointment apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing this
letter to let you know that I will not be able to attend the interview
arranged by you for admission in
a course because I have a prior appointment with my family Physician that I cannot skip.
I am really very sorry for the inconvenience caused to you but I am suffering Change preposition
to
with
a few health issues,which are bothering me a lot. Change preposition
from
Therefore
, I am called by the Doctor to discuss the results of my blood tests. However
, it would be very kind of you if you can
allot me some other day, which is convenient Wrong verb form
could
to
you because I want to join Change preposition
for
this
course and I have been preparing for this
interview
from
a long time.
In the end, I want to request you that kindly provide me a few details, Change preposition
for
firstly
, the duration of the interview
. Secondly
, is there any written test as well during the interview
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Change the punctuation
?
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task achievement
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, but there are a few language inaccuracies (e.g., "in best of the spirits" should be "in the best of spirits" and "suffering with a few health issues" should be "suffering from a few health issues").
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph deals with a single idea, but try to add more linking words for smoother transitions (e.g., "Additionally," instead of "In the end").
task achievement
Ensure the tone remains formal throughout. Phrases like "which are bothering me a lot" can be rephrased to sound more formal, such as "which have been causing significant discomfort."
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
The response is complete, clearly explaining the reason for rescheduling, offering another date, and requesting information about the interview.