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It is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books. Do you agree or disagree?

From early the twenty-
first
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 century with the implement of
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 based technologies,
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 books slowly have been decreasing popularity.
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, the majority of people concern that
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 books will completely swallow
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one
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. Overall, I cannot wholeheartedly agree with the topic statement because still the small amount of people prefer to read printed books
instead
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 of
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one
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 in order to prevent problems with eyes.
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 of all, few people can deny the fact that
computer
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 based technologies are convenient for reading due to they are not heavy and you can have more than
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 of
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book
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the book
 in
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 small gadget. In the past,
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, people used to take
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book
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 on travel or children suffer carried many books in backpacks: because of
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book
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 usually are heavy and demanded too much place.
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, print books demand many materials and have long processes before they are selling, to contrast via the internet easily upload electronic information and share around the world.
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,
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eBook
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the eBook
 has been gaining more popularity than
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 is throughout
this
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 century, and, even, some countries try to implement electronic books in the educational process.
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, the more popular gadgets for reading, the more have been noticed problem among users with sight. All electronic devices are fluoresce to compare printed is not,
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,
therefore
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 people who usually read
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 is overburden eyes, especially at night, that leads to ambiguous aftermaths.
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, some people still committed to print books because today some people admit that cannot read from electronic devices owing to different reasons.
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, as long as people have doubts about
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eBook
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the eBook
 on account of not the all influence of the electronic
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 on the health people are discovered, people will be reading
paper
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 books. To conclude, I believe that print books always have their area of customers for different reasons
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 as health or even the old-fashion behaviour of people.
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, society cannot ignore
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 as the part of innovations;
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, from my perspective, people are always fluctuating between the old style of reading and the new
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 that
accordingly
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 to the topic statement in partly agreement.

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