While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, other believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe global warming is the main reason of environmental issues, while some think the major provocation of world deteriorating is logging.

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essay will discuss on both views and give an evidence why global warming has more deleterious effects on the earth than logging. On one hand, people think the earth is suffering from global warming due to which surrounding is affecting atrocities all over the world. They think in order to make surrounding atmosphere free from any type of issues, people should confer prominence on controlling global warming.

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, because of the global warming complications there will be an increase in temperature so the sea level will increase and cause natural disasters like landslides, cyclone, and so on.

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, to restrain from natural calamities people should take measures to protect that.

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, people ponder logging is the main obstacles so they need to proffer focus on it. If people get less indulged in cutting down of trees,

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it will make ecology neat and green. If the area of the surroundings becomes green it will absorb carbon dioxide and confer fresh air to the people living around them. Even more it's protecting the area from natural victimisation.

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, logging control will assist to forge environment surrounding healthy as well as the disasters like landscape, landslide, soil erosion won't occur. So, logging should protect in all over the globe.

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, in my opinion people should give more attention to global warming as its effects both environments as well as human beings more perilously than logging.

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also affect

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the people, they can be easily recovered by afforestation programs and it's didn't take a long time to recover. But, if global warming occurs, it affects whole universe and natural calamities will have a detrimental effect on every living being around the world. To exemplify, it causes heavy rainfall with flooding, soil erosion, landslide. It's very difficult to control it as it causes from pollution, logging as well as an imbalance of ecology.

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, it should be given more importunate than logging obstacle. To sum up, even though logging has some detrimental side effect, global warming protection should be given more focus as it's very hard to mitigate

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dilemma in a short time once it occurs.

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also cause

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also causes

has also caused

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different types of natural crisis, which affect the lives of human beings.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Greenhouse effect
Industrial emissions
Sea levels
Extreme weather events
Biodiversity
Carbon emissions
Renewable energy
Paris Climate Accord
Carbon cycle
Soil erosion
Water cycles
Carbon sequestration
Reforestation
Sustainable forest management
Indigenous communities
Localized impacts

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, other believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Your opinion

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays university education is very expensive. Some people say that universities should reduce their fees, especially for the less fortunate stuvery spedents or those coming from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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